Thursday, 3 December 2015


this is unbelievable a man pi that goes on a boat with his family but to all his disparate there's a massive storm he jumps into a lifeboat and he falls .. a tiger and pi are lost in the pacific with nothing but a life boat a raft and each other

Wednesday, 2 December 2015


As the hyena teeth sink into the mankeys arm then the hyena leaps forward then i rip out my knife getting ready sluter the hyena.suddenly a tiger leaps out of the tapolan on the other side of the boat. the hyenas leg slowly stops moving then he looks back at me he jumps

Sunday, 1 November 2015


Dear mr cripps

i strongly believe that we should definitely not do this. this is not ok i'm definitely against this idea listen to me and you will understand why it is DUMB.
This is absolutely rubbish first of all there will be no game time so we will all get fat and do you want us to be a small america. we will not get to do any fun stuff that we can tell in the  future. we always love hearing my dad's stories.

secondly, people can't hold on morning tea to lunch you should now what we are talking about bladder problems like duncan. in the year 1 to 2s some kids could wet their pants that could scar there life for ever.and that would be horrible and what if we are sick we can't go to the office to call our mum or dads

there would be no training and we would not be able to win any of our sport exchanges and i don't think mr moore  will not be happy with our sports and mr cripps always say our school is the best but if we don't get sports training we won't be.

I Hope i have convinced you my three things were sport sport training and toilet breaks  

  

Monday, 21 September 2015

ooooooow

It was a sunny day not a cloud in the sky.The trees were making shadows. It was Tuesday August the 9th Duncan's heart was pumping,the steep concrete hill glimmered in the sunlight. What is going to happen.He is thinking about all the possibilities that could happen.’’Ok’’ he says with heart in his mouth.Duncan puts his foot on the hard pedal.3...2...1 he pushes down on the pedal, he starts zooming, there is something in the distance it's coming closer then it starts to reverse.”Boom!” Duncan is flying into the air. He does a front flip, landing onto his back he can't breath. Duncan’s limbs are in agony. He sees the driver, his eyelids are shut.”BEEP BEEP,” the car horn blasts. He sees a green wave he hears the doctor say his limbs are sharted

Tuesday, 4 August 2015


In the peace and silence around me you could hear a pin drop.The clouds are bunched up together so it looks like the icey mountain is erupting .Orange sun  beams into the clouds move. sun shines into my face .As i look down at the lake it is so clear you could see a tiny pebble it's just like a mirror “what a place’’

Wednesday, 17 June 2015

my story

The skodey mud splashed into the front bumper of the crew's new Ferrari f40. I'm going 130 mph.my heat is beating im getting closer to the wall “$#%!” I start to lose control i'm going to hit the wall. “Halp’’.I rebound into the other wall.I can here the crew talking in my ear piece

“get to the main road’’.I try to get to the main road I try to go into the forest.But then on coming traffic smashes into me a white pillow slams into my face …...