Monday, 21 September 2015

ooooooow

It was a sunny day not a cloud in the sky.The trees were making shadows. It was Tuesday August the 9th Duncan's heart was pumping,the steep concrete hill glimmered in the sunlight. What is going to happen.He is thinking about all the possibilities that could happen.’’Ok’’ he says with heart in his mouth.Duncan puts his foot on the hard pedal.3...2...1 he pushes down on the pedal, he starts zooming, there is something in the distance it's coming closer then it starts to reverse.”Boom!” Duncan is flying into the air. He does a front flip, landing onto his back he can't breath. Duncan’s limbs are in agony. He sees the driver, his eyelids are shut.”BEEP BEEP,” the car horn blasts. He sees a green wave he hears the doctor say his limbs are sharted

Tuesday, 4 August 2015


In the peace and silence around me you could hear a pin drop.The clouds are bunched up together so it looks like the icey mountain is erupting .Orange sun  beams into the clouds move. sun shines into my face .As i look down at the lake it is so clear you could see a tiny pebble it's just like a mirror “what a place’’

Wednesday, 17 June 2015

my story

The skodey mud splashed into the front bumper of the crew's new Ferrari f40. I'm going 130 mph.my heat is beating im getting closer to the wall “$#%!” I start to lose control i'm going to hit the wall. “Halp’’.I rebound into the other wall.I can here the crew talking in my ear piece

“get to the main road’’.I try to get to the main road I try to go into the forest.But then on coming traffic smashes into me a white pillow slams into my face …...